Storytelling secrets from a 4-year-old boy pretending to be Batman

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There’s a funny little post on reddit that actually gives us (1) a nice laugh and (2) a great little lesson in writing.

Here’s the story:

At the grocery store he’s running around doing superhero moves with a fierce expression and making kind of a spectacle of himself. A lady says, “Hello, young man, what’s your name?”

In a little kids’ version of a growly voice, he says “I’m Batman.”

The lady laughs. “I mean, what’s your real name?”

Again: “I’m BATMAN!”

“No, what’s your actual real name?”

(long pause)

“Bruce Wayne.”

As a father and a fan of Batman, I love this.

As a writer, I see a story in 66 words. How many words could you kill without hurting the story? Not many.

Everything has a purpose.

If you read this silly blog, you know about setups and payoffs, which are essential tools for writers of all sorts, whether you’re a blogger, a journalist, a speechwriter or a novelist finishing a 242,000-word epic about elves with lightsabers riding dragons. (Sidenote: I keep waiting for somebody to actually write this Jedi elf saga as a parody, or send me a link to the actual books, because THEY MUST EXIST.)

This little story has multiple setups that all pay off with the last line. It’s beautifully done and the laugh comes not just from the surprise, but from all those careful setups.

Bonus Video: little kid instructs adult in proper Batman voice

Bonus Photo: The many moods of Batman

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11 thoughts on “Storytelling secrets from a 4-year-old boy pretending to be Batman

  1. Love it! Brings back memories of my son (now 23) who insisted that he was Peter Pan, I was Wendy, his sister was Tinker Bell and his dad was Captain Hook. (That’s right, Wendy married Captain Hook.) Anyways, this went on for so long, I finally made us all costumes and we had our family portrait taken in them. To this day, it’s my favorite family portrait. 🙂


  2. See, this is why I write stories. It’s so great to see a kid get so into a fantastical world. It makes him feel strong, powerful, in control of his own life. (And, though he’d probably get his mouth washed out with soap for saying it, like a badass.) This is what true entertainment/escapism is supposed to do: make us feel better and more in control of our real lives. Way funny post!


  3. Reminds me of a story that Eric Berne (Transactional Analysis social game theory) tells about a little boy in a cowboy get-up who gets a Hey there, Cowboy greeting and says, I’m not a cowboy, mister, I just play one sometimes.


  4. Great post. Love those really short stories you can read in sixty seconds or less. They remind you of everything that is great about writing.


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